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Hmm yes, it was quite a confrontational path, hard to explain as it is such an all-consuming worldview. I hope I can do it justice bit by bit!

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Aug 8Liked by Marguerite Rosenfern

Marguerite’s reaction to the boys’ criticism is so human. I feel I lose her again when she reaches into the rituals then -bang- I’m right back with her when she is ‘scolded’ by the teacher. The teacher feels so controlling - and yet, if challenged on this, I would imagine her making it the Devi’s failing. Where is all this leading? So interesting…

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Jul 31Liked by Marguerite Rosenfern

I love the conversation between Sacha and Diego - the way they switch between languages is both hilarious and so very believable.

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Ha, thanks - I did chuckle writing this scene!

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